The animation and art style is well done, and this is a pretty good premise too. I'm interested to see where this goes. I'd say ease up on those moments of tweening like at 1:39 though, because that was really jarring to see.
The animation and art style is well done, and this is a pretty good premise too. I'm interested to see where this goes. I'd say ease up on those moments of tweening like at 1:39 though, because that was really jarring to see.
This is cute, I like how you draw all the Marios
Very cute! The squigglevision really ties into the Pen/Ink theme! One minor bit of advice: When Pen puts her hands on her hips, mind the length of each arm because the one on the right looks longer than the left.
The world you've created here is interesting, it's so surreal and yet so chill at the same time. Next time you should definitely get more voice actors though, because it's clear one person (I'm guessing you) voiced every character, and as a result it sounds dull in the audio department. I like most of the jokes, my favorite bit was definitely the virus. After we leave the office it gets kind of dull, though. The trash day bit didn't really have much of a payoff. The ending is also somewhat anticlimactic, though I'm not sure if that was intentional. In terms of art, it really shines. I love how characters sport different styles, and the backgrounds are nice as well. You've got real potential to make something better than this!
The backgrounds are incredible, great work with this!
God that dance make me laugh every time
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Joined on 11/7/17